v0.1:
TLDR: Has potential for good quality, no bugs, good orientation and tips. Language ok, so far have not seen anything "new" storywise. Not too much grind is great, but corruption is a little too fast.
Long version:
Coding and structure: 10/10 on windows
Nice visual and interface, NO BUGS so far ( a miracle... but a lot of features not in yet, complexity will rise... good luck). Good system of hints, buttons for quick travel, locations show icons of people. this aspect is absolutely perfect.
I played on windows, users of other platforms report problems, broken links (becasue upper/lower case matters there)
Writing and story: 6/10
- Language: Good english, no typos or nonsense, clear. Amount of text ok for me, that is subjective.
- Story: overall there is nothing new or original you have not seen in other games, this is a collection of ALL the favorites from all the games around. Let's not pretend we want it any other way... Good writing of individual scenes can make this excellent overall.
- Progression : Not the strongest side. While the grind is very reasonable, I feel the corruption of family is fast as hell. Sis goes from shy to cocksucker in two/three steps for no good reason. Other characters the same.
Feel and immersion: Videos match locations and situations, no weird/bizare events, so immersion is fairly fine. (except the the problem above)
Porn: ?/10
Subjective, everyone has own taste. In v0.1 is all MILFs (except sis), looks like author has a preference
But at least its original, not the same actresses / videos that are recycled over and over by lazy devs ( general plague of HTML games)
Personal tip for Dev: as you are adding more characters in future, add some "easy sluts" to the Uni to deliver early fap content, and this can allow to slow down the progression with family to a "immersive" pace. If the sluts are irrelevant side-characters, you can pick original "fresh faces" instead of the 10 models everybody is recycling for MCs because they have loads of videos.
TLDR: Has potential for good quality, no bugs, good orientation and tips. Language ok, so far have not seen anything "new" storywise. Not too much grind is great, but corruption is a little too fast.
Long version:
Coding and structure: 10/10 on windows
Nice visual and interface, NO BUGS so far ( a miracle... but a lot of features not in yet, complexity will rise... good luck). Good system of hints, buttons for quick travel, locations show icons of people. this aspect is absolutely perfect.
I played on windows, users of other platforms report problems, broken links (becasue upper/lower case matters there)
Writing and story: 6/10
- Language: Good english, no typos or nonsense, clear. Amount of text ok for me, that is subjective.
- Story: overall there is nothing new or original you have not seen in other games, this is a collection of ALL the favorites from all the games around. Let's not pretend we want it any other way... Good writing of individual scenes can make this excellent overall.
- Progression : Not the strongest side. While the grind is very reasonable, I feel the corruption of family is fast as hell. Sis goes from shy to cocksucker in two/three steps for no good reason. Other characters the same.
Feel and immersion: Videos match locations and situations, no weird/bizare events, so immersion is fairly fine. (except the the problem above)
Porn: ?/10
Subjective, everyone has own taste. In v0.1 is all MILFs (except sis), looks like author has a preference
But at least its original, not the same actresses / videos that are recycled over and over by lazy devs ( general plague of HTML games)
Personal tip for Dev: as you are adding more characters in future, add some "easy sluts" to the Uni to deliver early fap content, and this can allow to slow down the progression with family to a "immersive" pace. If the sluts are irrelevant side-characters, you can pick original "fresh faces" instead of the 10 models everybody is recycling for MCs because they have loads of videos.