Azeric

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Good one, good one :coffee:. I need to give the rules a second pass, but I'd rather not risk it since they've changed multiple times.

I'll really need to think of what to do there, partially due to pregnancy, mainly due to Lilith's story.
Oh and also I just wish you stuck with the older design(the first one) and just ignored many peoples ranting for a change since that is mostly a game killer nowadays.

I just hope you stay true to your ideals for this game and choose the best advice from your team and players(good ones) and also ignore the ranting of some people cause they can make your game "WOKE" (as I didn't like the design change for the girl with glasses, her face looks fatter not likable as compared to the old design which gave more personality and Maeve outfit became too simple and less sophisticated like before.) as they have terrible ideas.

This is just my opinion ignore it if it sounds mean to you(apologies if so) and if not I'll be happy. I just don't want this game to Fuck Up majorly.
 
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Karnewarrior

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Good one, good one :coffee:. I need to give the rules a second pass, but I'd rather not risk it since they've changed multiple times.

I'll really need to think of what to do there, partially due to pregnancy, mainly due to Lilith's story.
I don't think pregnancy would be an issue, so long as the story here is presumed to take place within 9-10 months, and as such the girl never gives birth.

Even then I seriously doubt Patreon would have an issue with it. But if you want to be cautious, you can just keep it to a belly bulge/hentai ovum X-ray/etc.
 

Greily

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You should know that some games have millions of dollars of funding for them. Not even that guarantees that gamers are happy. People need to stop acting soo entitled over games that they are pirating. Do you want the game dev to keep working hard for free?
But they aren't working for free right? As someone who has said they will prolly buy this game when it releases and has expressed that they enjoy it, why can't I also express my concerns as well? I won't be gaslit by some rando with a "hot take" on entitlement. Even if I do financially support this game I shouldn't have to say so to get my point across.

I voice my concern because I want to see the game succeed. That is it.
 
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So is there any reason the opening was remade into this cookie cutter shit instead of keeping the better one where they go through the portal together? Nevermind, dev gave up and is remaking the game whilst spoiling the main point of the game. Funny how he said he's got more time to make the game after destroying the game for patreons sake.
 
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Hatchet Games

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Wait. He really thinks I'm remaking the game as a NTR. :KEK:

Omg he revived a thread to shit on devs just to trash talk about me :BootyTime: This can't be the same guy that tried to spam me one star reviews in the past... Right?
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Hatchet Games

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So... which is it?
are you just lying when you say you like NTR to troll him?
this is not a good idea because people can't hear your tone of voice when typing and thus won't see it as sarcasm.
Maybe. Although I said it referring to the comment above when I joke with the Kronk picture. Somehow he didn't take it as a joke and thought I'm making the game as a NTR. I think that one was obviously a joke :HideThePain:
 
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harem.king

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Maybe. Although I said it referring to the comment above when I joke with the Kronk picture. Somehow he didn't take it as a joke and thought I'm making the game as a NTR. I think that one was obviously a joke :HideThePain:
I never heard of kronk.
also the picture is tiny and barely visible.
I suggest deleting such a joke post. or literally explicitly add in a sentence "this was a joke" at the end.
 

Destroy08xx

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So is there any reason the opening was remade into this cookie cutter shit instead of keeping the better one where they go through the portal together? Nevermind, dev gave up and is remaking the game whilst spoiling the main point of the game. Funny how he said he's got more time to make the game after destroying the game for patreons sake.
So what exactly was changed to just to comply with Patreon's puritan requirements? Game devs ought to boycott Patreon and use the alternatives instead.
 

FP00

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Good one, good one :coffee:. I need to give the rules a second pass, but I'd rather not risk it since they've changed multiple times.

I'll really need to think of what to do there, partially due to pregnancy, mainly due to Lilith's story.
I don't think pregnancy would be an issue, so long as the story here is presumed to take place within 9-10 months, and as such the girl never gives birth.

Even then I seriously doubt Patreon would have an issue with it. But if you want to be cautious, you can just keep it to a belly bulge/hentai ovum X-ray/etc.
Yeah, it's more likely they'd go after porn in general before going after any and all depictions of pregnancy.

I am 100% confident you can add pregnancy without any fuss from Patreon so long as you don't depict the actual birth and resulting child (meaning belly bulge/hentai ovum X-ray/etc are all fine as Karnewarrior said); there is literally nothing in the rules or current examples that would suggest they'd go after a creator for depicting pregnancy. Heck, considering the pace of the game the characters likely wouldn't even get through the first trimester before the end of the story, so no need for new sprites.

Lilith is a bit more difficult to do, however; you can have the child be entirely off-screen and only referred to by other characters with zero interactions with the player or release a patreon-friendly version with the character sprite replaced by a can of beans or something and have a patch for the uncensored version either here or on subscribstar.

It is ultimately your decision, though, regarding how you want to proceed, regardless of how any of us feel about it. Pregnancy can definitely be added with no problem, and there might be a solution to keep Lilith's story intact.
 

3000th

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Aug 18, 2021
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im curious, will there be any anal in this game? i know someone asked this question 2 years ago but there was only a thinking-face for a response, so im wondering if the stance on anal has changed now that there's significantly more progress on the game
 

Karnewarrior

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The idea of having Lilith nursing a can of beans instead of a baby as censorship is pretty fucking funny and regardless of how serious it is I'd love to see Lilith having a weird bean complex in the canon just because of that post

A can of baby beans swaddled in her arms
"I can't help you I have to nurse my baby." *gestures to can of beans*
 

JFlash

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Jul 19, 2022
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Documenting bugs/typos for the dev I found in my playthrough, version 0.6.1 public release

Bugs

- During the lesson Lilith passes out when Annie and Jade are talking it will show "Ms. Maeve" for the specific line Annie says "Ah. All of that because she wanted to teach me something special."
- Unsure if intentional or not but there is no way to view the Agnes masturbation scene. It does not show up in the girl's list and you have no sex options.
- After viewing the Agnes blowjob/footjob scene my game bugged for a second removing all my menu buttons so I could only travel around. It was fixed after a rollback, but I do not know how it happened nor could I get it to happen again.
- In the conversation with Dahlia her breasts from the customization screen will stay on screen during the conversation no matter if she was clothed or not. They are a separate pair that stays in the same position from when you speak to her doing the slight bounce.


Typos
- When Jade mentions how Ms. Maeve is the perfect witch she says "tallets".
- When asking Jade to bake a cake Author says he wishes to give her book back, but at the end of the sentence is two brackets "()"

These are all from the same scene idk what was up with this one. I believe I missed a good chunk as well.
- After staring at Maeve's fat ass Maeve gets you to admit to lying about going to the cave Arthur says, "Can't you so something with the creature?" I believe the so is meant to be "do."
- Later in the same scene she'll also stutter typed out as "B.But you could also listen to your elders this time!" Previously I noticed they were hyphenated, so I believe that needs changed not totally sure.
- Also same scene "... cave thing is such a big issue for her just confusses you." "confuses" instead of "confusses"
- Next text box. "specificaly" needs changed to "specifically"
- Next text box. "*sigh* Didn't you know how worried I was after I found you both on that cave?" didn't to don't and on to in "*sigh* Don't you know how worried I was after I found you both in that cave."
- Authur "You carry all of the resources for many of us on that bag?" I believe should be "You carry all of the resources for us all in that bag?" Can be slightly different. I believe Authur is highlighting the size of the bag compared to the amount she carries since the magic bag is mentioned after.
- Ms. Maeve "You can save so much things in here, it will feel like it's infinite!" much to many
- "You face between Maeve's face, an urge..." should be "Your face between Maeve's breasts, an urge..."

- When going to get clothes for Annie "Y-Yes. It's just that... I can talk with people, remember?" should be "can't"


Unsure I am mainly unsure if this is due to code error or just scripting issues
- At the end of the scene where you and Jade sneak into the cave and get her locket you have a "thinking" textbox pop up with a black screen. I imagine the black screen is unfinished artwork but the text box is blank with only "()" showing. Don't know if text was intended here or not.
 
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Scimitarstaff

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Dec 29, 2019
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This game has a really charming art style and premise. All the girls are pretty fun as well. Nice to see the developer is willing to give out their thoughts here as well, one of the most interesting things is seeing how the game develops over time and the thought process put into game mechanics and design.

Looking forward to seeing how the game is fleshed out, and how the Magic Academy premise is utilized over just being a place for events with the girls.
 
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Percipere0

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Feb 17, 2024
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Just discovered this game yesterday as a result of the new update. What a cool story concept, and such nice cute characters! You have a new fan in me, and I will be waiting patiently for the continuation of the content.
 
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