Ren'Py Hermione Trainer [v0.2] [EdgeAI]

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tarzan999

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Okay... I just don't get it.
The entire point of making this game is to appeal to fans of Hermione Granger from Harry Potter, right? The young, very petite, small-chested little waif/waifu... So you give her pornstar tits that go completely against the whole appeal of Hermione, and are least likely to resonate with the people who really liked the petite Hermione in the first place? Were you not breastfed as a child or something? Did you not think about the market for this at all?
I wouldn't mind a Hermione that looks even closer to Emma Watson, but in WT Hermione has big boobs and it obviously didn't hurt the game.

I think the big current problem is that Hermione looks super shy and timid.
 

Edgelord69420

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I understand my friend. Except my criticism is Valid. With a trainer you're giving the game away early. No surprise, no fetish, mind control, or punishment. No real humour, pranks. It was very vanilla, and it on an A.I model. It is undressed before you've even corrupted it. It's not drawn, does it have a thatch, does its hole look different, and has it got a dildo in it, are its nipples shaded, or bigger. They're all the same with A.I symmetrical. No surprise there. Nothing extreme or funny. It was like, okay, strip now. Obviously, it was just upto her tits. Yes, done, next the same, done, game over.

Or try to suggest how it is going to be different? Obviously, I have only seen 5 minutes of it?
Well for Snape there wont be a big corruption aspect. She is a grown woman and not at all innocent, although there will be branching paths for her depending on how you treat her. I wont spoil much, but she will change drastically as a person depending on what you do too.

Hermione however, being a young student and all will focus more heavily on corruption. Take everything you see in this version with a grain of salt. Its not representative of what the final product will look like, but rather a way for me to gauge intrest in the project too. Im Spending hours each day coding, writing, editing and drawing to make this game a good game and if no one wants or even likes the idea then i would prefer knowing that as early as possible so i can change the direction or even make an entirely different game.
 
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Korvus

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Hi Edge, I've got some ideas for other characters, this of course being a long term thing.


For some reason WTS seemed to focus on making Cho hermiones rival (they wouldn't have any crossover, Hermiones a book worm, and cho's a jock, they honestly would never meet); But rival wise in this game you could have it be Tracey Davis and Daphne Greengrass for Slytherin; the Patil twins (saves on art, to be honest) for Ravenclaw and Gryffindor; & potentially adding in Lavender Brown whos looking for affection after leaving Ron.

Otherwise you could stick with the good ol' Pansy, who Hermione actively despises, and who she'd eagerly wish to corrupt after you've reached a certain threshold; or feature Fleur the Veela as the 'mind manipulating french tart' (think Jean Grey in Rogue Like Evolution)

(the best thing for those girls, is nobodies really done anything with them, so you can do your own art/designs)

Otherwise there is the old regulars...
Luna's an old favourite but she has been done to death; Susan 'exists' but overall is as neglected as Harry in his cupboard; & tonks... People just get stuck on tonks, don't ask me why.


Alternately, since you've played around with Snape, you could potentially have the rest of the golden trio be genderswapped; or get genderswapped, after they try to confront us when Hermiones reached a certain threshold.

Regardless, best of luck. We will watch your career with great interest!
 
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Edgelord69420

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Hi Edge, I've got some ideas for other characters, this of course being a long term thing.


For some reason WTS seemed to focus on making Cho hermiones rival (they wouldn't have any crossover, Hermiones a book worm, and cho's a jock, they honestly would never meet); But rival wise in this game you could have it be Tracey Davis and Daphne Greengrass for Slytherin; the Patil twins (saves on art, to be honest) for Ravenclaw and Gryffindor; & potentially adding in Lavender Brown whos looking for affection after leaving Ron.

Otherwise you could stick with the good ol' Pansy, who Hermione actively despises, and who she'd eagerly wish to corrupt after you've reached a certain threshold.

Otherwise there is the old regulars...
Luna's an old favourite but she has been done to death; Susan 'exists' but overall is as neglected as Harry in his cupboard; & tonks... People just get stuck on tonks, don't ask me why.


Alternately, since you've played around with Snape, you could potentially have the rest of the golden trio be genderswapped; or get genderswapped, after they try to confront us when Hermiones reached a certain threshold.

Regardless, best of luck. We will watch your career with great interest!
I really like the idea of Harry and Ron being genderswapped too! I hadnt thought of that. I think if they were to be genderswapped i personally would want them to be genderswapped from the beginning. And the idea hasnt been done before either so its very interesting to me. As for characters like Cho and especially Daphne i want to avoid them for now, maybe they can make an appearance at some point, but i dont want to use all the same concepts and characters witch trainer and innocent witches uses. I want my game do be radically different to those games and provide a new experience for players who crave some more potter content.
 
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as22

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I really like the idea of Harry and Ron being genderswapped too! I hadnt thought of that. I think if they were to be genderswapped i personally would want them to be genderswapped from the beginning. And the idea hasnt been done before either so its very interesting to me. As for characters like Cho and especially Daphne i want to avoid them for now, maybe they can make an appearance at some point, but i dont want to use all the same concepts and characters witch trainer and innocent witches uses. I want my game do be radically different to those games and provide a new experience for players who crave some more potter content.
A cheating plot would be fun. You can have the female characters like hermione etc going out with the other characters at the start of the game, and you work to corrupt them from the behind the scenes. It would make it more enjoyable watching characters interact with their girlfriends that are getting sluttier for some reason, all while they lie and hide everything.
 
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Korvus

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True...

If you wanted to indulge at least in a loose story, I think perhaps looking at when you set the game would work (characters aged up regardless of course), for adding

Philosophers Stone has Quirrel/voldemort at the castle; Hermione and co are obsessed with finding what's behind the forbidden corridor (can be used as a means for corrupting her/them), and retreiving the Stone (you could then have us stop Voldemort from stealing the stone, only to realise
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Chamber of Secrets - We're hired in as Lockhearts replacement after he tries to use Ron's wand during class. We then, while corrupting the girls, have to make sure whatevers turning the boys of hogwarts to stone doesn't get them too. Meetings with Hermione/other girls would be under the guise of ensuring curfews in order and listening to their issues.

Prisoner of Azkaban - Same as Chamber of Secrets, but the background story is about
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, a deranged mass murderer escaping Askaban and Snapes obsession with 'dealing' with them..

Goblet of fire - the Triwizard tournaments upon us. and now the castles full of french and Eastern european witches (the boys got lost at the Flu Customs office). The golden trio are trying to save Harry's bacon after theyre added into the competition; meanwhile a french Veela is interested in our complete immunity to her charms...

etc, for the rest of the books.
 

nada_nix

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Okay... I just don't get it.
The entire point of making this game is to appeal to fans of Hermione Granger from Harry Potter, right? The young, very petite, small-chested little waif/waifu... So you give her pornstar tits that go completely against the whole appeal of Hermione, and are least likely to resonate with the people who really liked the petite Hermione in the first place? Were you not breastfed as a child or something? Did you not think about the market for this at all?
Nah, it appeals to me as a fan of Akabur. It's more Akabur nostalgia than Hermione nostalgia.
 

Redmew

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Yeah i think Hermione is the big culprit here. She looks a bit too much like his version. Luckily i haven't done much work for her yet so its much easier to change her this early in her development.
IMO she looks perfect. Good luck on your game!
 

tsakalos

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Commenting for the future, hoping this game isn't like the 20 others that have the same menu "show underwear, show pussy, etc" where you just click 2 menus to raise affection and that's it.
 

Edgelord69420

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Commenting for the future, hoping this game isn't like the 20 others that have the same menu "show underwear, show pussy, etc" where you just click 2 menus to raise affection and that's it.
It is currently, but its not what i intend for the final game. The menu system serves more as a showcase right now. I'm working hard writing and trying to integrate the scenes into the story. Although i do want a menu available to let players replay scenes.
 

Puckhog27

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I think Hermione is almost as popular as Lara Croft for adult content. I think people like to see an educated woman or an athletic woman corrupted. Personally, I like the innocent witches the best so far. The Witch Trainer silver isn't to bad. I think the older trainer games can be a bit full and repetitive. There aren't many options available. It can still be fun though.
 

Edgelord69420

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Really hoping we can change the color of the black haired girls nipples to pink. Dark colored nipples aren't... great.
Other girls will have pink nipples. Her having dark nipples is just what felt right as i was making and writing her.
If i were to include that option it would be late in the development process. I do have another dark haired girl who will have pink nipples in mind already.
 
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